tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5176355230381926469.post5717622085942309840..comments2023-05-26T00:44:29.951-07:00Comments on Sasha Hart CG Artist: Ideas So Far ...Sasha Harthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05529602071474347345noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5176355230381926469.post-46666455295923564772011-02-06T13:50:28.746-08:002011-02-06T13:50:28.746-08:00Yer I think I need to incorprate the unicycle abit...Yer I think I need to incorprate the unicycle abit more as well. But finding it a bit hard to incorprate it without it seeming wired for why it is there in the first place.I am liking your idea about about the retired man having a flashback which will help with incorprating it into my story.Sasha Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05529602071474347345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5176355230381926469.post-19939954949842248772011-02-06T10:35:47.743-08:002011-02-06T10:35:47.743-08:00I like 2 and 3 the best, I'm a sap for the int...I like 2 and 3 the best, I'm a sap for the introspective ending. I think you should incorporate the unicycle more into the story though; perhaps in a flashback? In #3 The retired man could have a flashback after seeing the crew picture on the wall, could show him perhaps riding the unicycle on the moon? This would explain why an old man would think to try and learn the unicycle (something a little out of the ordinary for most pensioners?).Oliver 'Lifeforce99' Fowlshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18370887949491338500noreply@blogger.com